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slow dance

      Saturday 5 April, 2003 at 5:35PM (Nereus)  ::  permalink  ::  comments (7)

I just received this poem via email from my sister in New Zealand. The poem was allegedly written by a terminally ill young girl in a New York Hospital who had 6 months left to live at the time. Apparently she wanted to send a letter telling everyone to live their life to the fullest, since she never will.

Although this is apparently an urban legend of sorts, I thought the poem was worth publishing here regardless of the validity, because what it says is just as valid no matter who wrote it.

Slow Dance

Have you ever watched kids
On a merry-go-round?
Or listened to the rain
Slapping on the ground?
Ever followed a butterfly's erratic flight?
Or gazed at the sun into the fading night?
You better slow down.
Don't dance so fast.
Time is short.
The music won't last.

Do you run through each day
On the fly?
When you ask How are you?
Do you hear the reply?
When the day is done
Do you lie in your bed
With the next hundred chores
Running through your head?
You'd better slow down
Don't dance so fast.
Time is short.
The music won't last.

Ever told your child,
We'll do it tomorrow?
And in your haste,
Not see his sorrow?
Ever lost touch,
Let a good friendship die
Cause you never had time
To call and say,"hi"
You'd better slow down.
Don't dance so fast.
Time is short.
The music won't last.

When you run so fast to get somewhere
You miss half the fun of getting there.
When you worry and hurry through your day,
It is like an unopened gift....
Thrown away.
Life is not a race.
Do take it slower
Hear the music
Before the song is over.



comments (7)

Colleen
April 6, 2003 12:51 AM [link]

that poem made me cry!

Putty Girl
April 7, 2003 6:30 PM [link]

Nereus- Thanks heaps for the blogger help. I LOVE THE CAT CARTOON. At any rate, I am still working on things and will let you know when it is done.
Thanks again:)

Trish
April 7, 2003 9:42 PM [link]

Beautiful poem. If only people followed that advice... I know I don't always, but have a few tough experiences and it teaches you some of what's contained in those words, even if it's not as well-formed.

Jason
April 13, 2003 12:00 PM [link]

Come ON people...doesn't anyone check snopes.com? Visit, and search for the first line of the poem...it's an urban legend, guys. Geez.

Nereus
April 15, 2003 8:54 AM [link]

I suspected as much, but regardless of that, it is still thought provoking.

Millie Napoli
September 9, 2005 9:33 AM [link]

Please note that the author of Slow Dance is Dr. David L. Weatherford, who has written many other beautiful and nspirational poems. Please check the following websites:

http://www.breakthechain.org/exclusives/slowdance.html

http://urbanlegends.about.com/library/weekly/aa022599.htm

http://www.snopes.com/inboxer/medical/slowdance.asp

http://www.davidweatherford.com

The author encourages people to use his poems as long as he is given credit for his writings.

Please let your members know and spread the word around to stop the cruel hoaxes.

Thank you.

A fan of Mr. Weatherford's writings

Millie Napoli

K.
July 10, 2006 8:51 PM [link]

Thanks for the author of Slow Dance, Millie, and the link to Dr. Weatherford's work; it is a beautiful poem and you're right, the hoax is cruel.


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